The Hunter That Returned From Hell

I read 80 chapters and I can say this novel has a lot room for improvement. For beginning... Let's start with MC, he spent 400 years in hell... I guess it killed most of his brain cells. Zero research about 'hunter' actions before becoming one. If not plot armor, his stupidity would kill his family.
Writing quality needs some editing. Some typpos here and there. Some sentences are quiete broken.
WQ - 3 stars. You should consider editing your story before putting it before pay wall. None likes paying for being proof reader...
SU - 4 stars.
Story dev. - 3 stars. It's okay... Ruthless protagonist trying to improve his family situation and acts like wuxia protagonist killing random guy son. Blah blah blah. It could be avoided with some brains.
Character design - 2 stars. It's probably weakest side of this story. Most of characters are cliché or bland.
World background - 4 stars. Currently it feels like default Korean novel.
This rating might improve if you make things better later in story. This review is based on free chapters. Maybe, you started to put more effort after getting contracted.
I will visit later... No money for spirit stones and run out of passes. I hope this story improves.
Good luck.

As the first real reader review i shall tell you the person who is reading this because you want to know about the book to read the book because, it is a good story, so stop reading this and read the book.

really bad grammar, not creative at all...
why the hell is this so high rated??? I am pretty sure there should be better stuff in the top 20???

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The number of angry 80-year-olds is much lower than the number of angry under 30-year-olds.
In all theory, a 418-year-old should be a very patient person.
Likewise, if you spend 400 years in "hell" and you lean on something that you don't have, and which gradually becomes a mirage, a distant memory (Like a family) you become crazy to a fairly high speed.
I always thought that the novel where the goal of the mc was something passive (here "to protect his family") the novel could only be boring.
Just watch all the best anime, imagine if naruto didn't want to be Hokage, if Gon (HxH) didn't want to find his father, if Songoku didn't want to fight powerful opponents, if Light didn't want to kill all the criminals...
A goal is at least half of a character, if he doesn't have one then it's a half empty character.
In short, let's talk more concrete, the main character could be interesting if he had the will to do something.
The world is basic and nothing special.
The secondary characters are at least as boring as the protagonist.
the writing quality is rather good if we forget the fact that the author does not proofread.
the rhythm of the chapters is good.

this novel was taken from somewhere else, I remember starting to read it a few years back but dropped it for being too tedious to read, I don't know if it's a stolen novel or a repost cuz I couldn't care less