The General’s Spellbound Heart

Nice story, cool setup. Also kinda didn't like the arc where he goes to the main planet that much, the first part was kinda nice, then i didn't like it, because he has to use an avatar, and not his main body.... I think thats 140 letters right

Nice story I must say. Strong characters and great suspense. The title of the book is catching just like the book itself. I hope for more updates. Well done author.

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I really liked the story and the characters it's a bit too long for my taste but it's good nonetheless.  good work mate, also the cover is outstanding.

"No."

"Please, Spare me the lawful act, and besides I have no desire to Force him into anything both my warriors have all attributes averaging over 30 so why would I want a weakling such as him?"