The Door That Finds You

I was thinking if it was a love triangle, though the story becomes spooky and dark. Well done author.

no need to improve cuz this novel is already gone case mc is just disgusting who only thinks how to absorb and dispose of heroines truely a pice of shit. he doesn't feel like villain but he feels more like a child between protagonist and Beelzebub whe the had intense session. it would be better if author used lust system instead of gluttony. trust me if mc could have gotten heroines in his harem and whenever hero comes across his harem and system again lables them as heroines. he could milk them of points like broken cheat . all in all your novel fails the original work of art. the worst villain mc I have seen

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This story has an interesting premise, and after reading a few chapters so far, I can say that I like the direction it is going in. There aren't many mistakes, and the ones that are there, it'sminor. I also like the MC of the story, the concept, and the setting, especially the world building. Overall, it's going well so far, keep up the good work and good luck!

Prime then looked at the other deities, "They pinch me hard on the cheeks, my arms, sometimes even on my legs!"