The Divine Wolf... or?

So, I've been seeing authors doing this, so I might as well do it myself, I mean why not? Anyways, I'm very insecure so if you're too harsh with your critique I'm going to go cry in a corner. Nah but for real though, I hope everyone enjoys the story, and if you don't then I hope you manage to find something better out there!

Great potential until the MC decided to lick humanity's ass and be their pawn.

Bullied boy, hates society, etc etc. As a wolf all of that is irrelevant because you know..forced plot must happen. Just..Author, please try to know that if you pick a monster MC, at least try to stick with the monster part. Or just name it "The Divine Wolf..." and stop there. Just remove the or cause that's all he is. A pet. A waste of a novel idea.

AQUI E BRAZUCA CORRE NEGADA, falando sério está obra tem potencial , por enquanto está bom mas não pare metade das fan-fics não prosperam porque os autores não continuam a obra , e as pessoas acabam perdendo interesse.

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By chapter 12 the mc and everyone hes meet so far is completly unlikeable, disintersting, and everyone except mary sue princess is a couple brainvells from retarded. Mc starts out wanting to be strong and wanting to gain power quickly. 3 chapter later hes being bullied, put down, and had mary sue use mind manipulation magic on him and HE FEELS BAD FOR GETTING ANGRY AFTER HE GOT DISRESPECTED TO HIS FACE AND SHE USES MAGIC TO AFFECT HIS MIND. I just wish i could give the story .05/5. Completly gutted his own story and didnt make it chapter 20. The most likeable character? The dead enemies the mc killed that are just animals trying to survive.

Dumb mc he acts like a dog. Dropped after he followed the princess.
MC IS DUMB if that's your cup of tea then this is the book for you.....
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