The Dark Mage Of The Magus World

So far, the novel is nothing special, and is even a bit lackluster. Translation quality is fine, very few mistakes, but not impeccable. Updates aren't a factor as I am posting this after finishing the first 20 chapters uploaded. The story is so far not super interesting, the first 16 or so chapters are actually just terrible, but it started to pick up a bit near the end of the first 20. Character designs are not good. There's nothing interesting about the main character besides the fact that they're strong, and even then their strength isn't something displayed in a special or intriguing way, they're just boring, and for a novel which is supposed to revolve around character rather than action, this does a very poor job. World background is fine, but once again, nothing special but competent at the very least somewhat. Overall, from my point leaving off at chapter 20, it may be a novel worth reading. As I stated before, the first 16 or so chapters are almost garbage, but it does start to get slightly more interesting in the last few of the first 20 chapters, and depending on if it continues to get slightly better than it is, it would barely be worth reading, but if it gets quite a bit better, then it definitely will be worth the read.I don't know if you are able to edit reviews, but if so once a few more chapters are up I may change some stuff depending upon the status of the novel at the time

if only cuttlefish would get a translation that respects his skills

ha another review from you know who.. anyway I love this this book couse its amazing. yeah..................................................

I cant stop laughing reading this novel. . You all should vote for this. . I guarantee u will not regret it. . I want moreeeeeeee. . Please pick this novel. .

This is comedy-oriented story with some action in between.Problem is, this is low-brow comedy and fails miserably. It's as cliche as my friend's jokes he takes from internet.There's nothing interesting going on plot wise. It's dull and boring, witout any goal. Characters, including MC, are not really well fleshed-out. Translation is solid and so is MC's disciple Xiaobai. The rest is as average as the carrots I ate for breakfast today.

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