The Clock Never Ticked

very good, only problem is that it just stopped the whoke monster thing and just became a cultivation novel for more than I am comftrable with and it feels like its not worth it

Hopefully the author doesn’t delete my review.SPOILERThe Mc was naive for a very long time.(100+ chapters)You can’t even give a proper excuse for that. He was almost killed more than the fingers on my hands, yet he still chose to trust people? He was told multiple times to not do so but he doesn’t listen. Then his friends try to kill him for the sake of their clans, and they think all is well? He’ll listen and forgive us? Like we didn’t try to kill him. The only question I have is “does he forgive them”. The plot was good at first but now it’s just not good. It was dragged out for way too long.  Hopefully this novel gets a redo.

The story is delightful, the character is delightful, the author is delightful... everything is delightful just read it. What are you doing? Stop reading this review and start reading the story! Go on! Get! ?

I don't think this is a terrible idea, and the story development is okay. However, I can't get past the fact that the grammar in this story isn't very well developed. I know not every author can hire a proofreader for every chapter, but this webnovel from the start honestly feels a little rushed on the author's part. If you're the type of person that's okay with some bad grammar, this could be an okay story. I just can't focus on the story when my immersion is being constantly broken by present and past tense switching around, when in narration only past tense should be used unless referring to a character asking himself a question about his/her future. I really feel like the idea for this webnovel is great, but when the other reviews say it is childish, that's probably because it feels like something a teenager might have written at times.

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I like the way your new work is trying to go in a whole new direction and all, after it is tiring to always read about  some unlucky guy trying to get revenge for being rejected by a girl. "Boy! Ain't got no manners..." How many people get rejected daily and it does not be come the highlight of their life. Keep that up, but if the story starts developing such symptoms, I'm bailing