The Black Moon Saga

yoo why is this here when it's already translated to 1900+ chapters in other website? ¯_ಠ_ಠ_/¯......................

very nice ...................                                       .......   ...........................................................................

Raw name: 通天仙路Status: 1360 Chapters (Completed)........................................................................................................

I almost died trying to read through waves of useless descriptions and confusing overly elborate great  walls of text. As some people commented, even gods will have trouble reading through this.

I found myself liking the MC much more starting from C3. The characterization feels humorous with an underlying serious tone. I have a personal preference for such atmospheres and the writing accentuates that chapter.Moving on to technical issues, I feel that the novel will improve with less usage of adverbs.I notice that you have a heavy inclination of using the word 'had' and using the phrase 'a small'. Perhaps some variation would help here?All the best!

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