Can we just talk about how incredible Cheng Ning's dialogue is in this chapter? Because it is absolutely stellar.
Let me start with the tractor scene. Gu Jingwen asks Cheng Ning to switch places with Zhao Zhi because she is dressed warmly. And Cheng Ning's response? She calls over Min Ran instead and says: "Comrade Gu, Comrade Zhao is your sweetheart. If she's cold, why don't you sit closer to the front to shield her? Or you could just hold her directly."
I nearly fell off my chair. This is Cheng Ning at her most savage. The way she delivers this line — calm, almost polite, using the formal "comrade" address while absolutely dismantling their relationship in front of everyone — is perfection. And the narration tells us Gu Jingwen's face turned blue with anger. Zhao Zhi's head buzzed. This is dialogue that does triple duty: it advances the plot, it reveals character, and it creates immediate tension.
Then there is Min Ran's response: "Ah, this spot is so much warmer! Cheng Ning, thank you—next time I'll treat you to something!" And then she deliberately adds: "Comrade Zhao, your seat should be warm too. You don't know how freezing that draft outside is!" This is such a natural, lively voice. Min Ran is straightforward, a bit playful, and she clearly picks up on the tension immediately. Her dialogue feels authentic — she is not trying to be clever, she is just being herself, and in doing so, she amplifies Cheng Ning's point.
The narrator's voice is also worth discussing. It is close third person, mostly anchored in Cheng Ning's perspective, but it dips into other characters' thoughts occasionally. When we get Gu Jingwen's internal monologue — "Strange clothes, strange temperament" — it feels like a natural intrusion, not an exposition dump. And when Cheng Ning reflects on Han Dongyuan's life: "When has Han Dongyuan ever eaten black bread? So this was the life he had lived in the countryside. Her heart felt bitter." This is such a restrained, powerful moment. The author does not overexplain. We understand everything through this single observation.
The dialogue between Director Xue and Han Youfu is also excellent. The whispered explanation about Cheng Ning's connections — it feels like eavesdropping, which is exactly how Cheng Ning experiences it. And Han Youfu's gruff, no-nonsense responses: "Eat what? Look at the time." This is a man who has no patience for city delicacies. His voice is distinct, rough, and completely believable.