The Ace

You have a talent, I'm glad it's not going to waste.

Favourite story I've read in a long time. The plot is good and Ace is a fun character to read about. Trust me. Read it.


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I absolutely loved this. it added such a nice aspect to the usual slice of life. i was very invested in the story and managed to finish im a day. overall 10/10

Yes, the shameless author had to come and do it, no seriously, give it a try,  if you like, you found a new book to keep you entertained, and if you don't...Well, at least you can say you tried :)

Writing quality is spot on except for the rare miss spelling. Paragrapgs should also be cut to read easier.

Update stability is practically every week so its good.

Storry development is good, but gives me the feel similar to Chinese novels, except it's the american version. With less racism. Hopefully.

Charachter design is good. I wish he started of older but I'm cool with how he is now. Also wish he was abit more Op. Like Natalie Portman in the movie Lucy. But he would gain power at a slower rate.

The being at the bigining should also make an appearance, soon but that's just my opinion.

World background is pretty much earth with just afew more baddies and mysteries, so its ok.

So over all its a good read that I recommend you try. Keep it up author.

This is a good ass story so far the character is nice but isn't so stupid that he's nice and you can get those vibes from him that he simply enjoys life and wants friends. Please keep the story going author there are so many small stories out there that authors drop but I'd hate to see it happen to this one.