Super Card System

The book is exceptional, featuring a well-developed plot that's paced just right without feeling hurried. The main character is refreshing, as they aren't your typical arrogant protagonist. A significant factor that makes it an enjoyable read is the outstanding translation; the translator has truly mastered their craft.

This fanfiction stands out with its originality, thanks to unforeseen twists that set it apart from a story lacking a complete narrative. Despite my reservations about the system employed and the main character's portrayal, there are intriguing aspects that grabbed my interest. Since the translation is ongoing, I'll refrain from diving into spoilers. The author skillfully takes liberties with underdeveloped plot points, weaving compelling interpretations. Had it not been for the emergence of new details, I might have fully embraced the direction they took with the One Piece universe, particularly during the Whole Cake Island arc, which was not yet concluded. Connecting the world in this story is commendable, but it loses some credibility for occasionally indulging in self-expression. Approach it as a fanfiction, and appreciate the author's clever moments.

Is there only fighting in the game world or do they fight in the real world with magic

The system constantly hinders the main character's growth, making it difficult for them to develop their skills effectively. As a result, their power progression is alarmingly sluggish - they are one of the least improving protagonists I've come across. Despite this, the MC refuses to push themselves to improve rapidly. I'm losing interest, as I don't wish to follow a story where it takes the protagonist 50 years just to reach a Super Rookie level. Although I'm exaggerating slightly, the situation is still concerning. After seven years, the MC possesses only 217 doriki - a weak member of CP9 would have around 600. Even at maximum power, they can unleash an attack with approximately 400 doriki, but they are unable to sustain it further.

The pacing is leisurely, but there's a time skip involved. The main character isn't excessively powerful compared to other novels where the protagonist becomes a vice admiral by chapter 15. They need to improve their skills, which requires diligent effort, similar to the growth in 'GSS' but not overly OP.

This is my first time reviewing here, and I'm still getting the hang of it. Let's call it a learning curve. *laughs it off*

The author does an impressive job with One Piece lore, skillfully intertwining their narrative with the show's events and filling in gaps with subtle details. It's a fascinating read, especially for dedicated fans. However, the translation could use some polishing, as there are occasional repetitions of sentences with slightly altered versions, and a few errors in word choice. For instance, character names are inconsistently translated, such as Hina being referred to as Tina and then back to Hina again – these are simple fixes that would significantly improve the readability.

The system in the story is somewhat inconsistent and underutilized. Instead of relying heavily on god-like card abilities, the protagonist focuses on training to gain strength. While this approach is acceptable, it feels incongruous for a novel titled "Super Card System" when the system is introduced extensively in the early chapters but becomes largely irrelevant later on. An example would be a new card drawn in Chapter 120; its statistics and abilities aren't disclosed until Chapter 140, where the protagonist simply equips it and uses its powers as needed, which can be confusing.