1- the WG dosnt give out bounties for randoms for no reason, so mc getting a bounty for just fighting mihwak is retarded. Hell they didnt even approach him, and yet they gave him a bounty. Thats stupid. High bounty is dope, but give a reason. Hell luffy punched a noble and attacked marine ford and destroyed impel down and he only had his bounty raised by 100 mill (though all fans hated this, and i agree...)but i hope u get what i mean2- what retard tells that they are from another world? Dude, u dont do this. Why would u do this? Unique power is believable, especially in one piece3- why is MC so trusting that he gives this info within hrs of meeting? I get they fought but seriously? Telling u are from another world to a stranger? I am an amnesiac would've been enoughLook story is interesting, dope even BUT damn man, no bash/flame but ur bk has some retarded shit