I would rate the translation as 5 out of 5, particularly praising Lilies are Flowers and Nighthawk Works for their excellent work. The storytelling pace is also a solid 5/5, maintaining a gripping drama-like flow without any dull moments.
However, the character development receives a 3/5. Zhan Zhao and Bai Yutang maintain consistency, but their chemistry lacks depth. Gongsun Ce's character arc seems inconsistent, starting as a dark character but later transforming into a typical tsundere. Bai Jingtang might be intriguing for some, but his actions and the portrayal of brain damage as a plot device raise questions about the author's understanding of the subject.
In terms of scientific accuracy, the rating is 3/5. Although the author attempts to incorporate psychology, some aspects are portrayed inaccurately, like Zhao Jue's character and the portrayal of Dissociative Identity Disorder. The author appears to have done minimal research, which can be disappointing for readers expecting a well-researched police procedural.
Overall, the story is lightweight and entertaining, suitable for a casual read, but with noticeable inconsistencies and a superficial approach to its scientific elements. If the author aimed for a supernatural mystery rather than pretending to be a realistic police investigation, the story might have been more enjoyable without the reliance on misunderstood psychology.