RomCom: Sleepy Boy and Delinquent Girl
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Minamoto Kazuya is an ordinary 2nd year highschool boy who's always sleepy. He frequently sleep on the rooftop of his school. One day, an incident occured thus interrupting his peaceful moment. He saw a group of bullies were beaten up by a girl. She is his classmate. Who would've thought this occurrence will lead to a love blooming relationship between these two.




(Note: I dont have experience in writing novel lmao and why tf am i using Japan setting. Am not even japanese duh. Okay just enjoy my shitty romcom.) (cover image not sponsored, stole it from google)

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Averengly intelligent mc that has all his action exalted as super smart by author. Lot of plot armour, everytimr mc is in need of something, magically appears 'quest' in which he gets everything he needs, standard idiotic selfishness (he is eternal and instead of using it to his advantage in sense of sharing some secrets secretly and making out of it in long run, he is too scared to give up something), do rme personally too boring
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1)  I absolutely love your story and you have my addiction burning.2) The only real constructive feedback that I have for you is that when you realise you are using some words too many times (ex. Recomposing or ingress) that you use the thesaurus to give you more options to expand your vocabulary. 3)  Last thing, try to utilize words that aren't a mouthful for people to read.  Using a softer approach for the sentence "his ingress to the royal capital was a grand spectical to witness." could be changed to "his entrence to the royal capital was a grand sight to see." Those are just some general statements I made up, but the second sentence is far easier for people to read vice the former.4) Again I love your story and your use of some interesting vocabulary and these are just some suggestions that could help amplify your writing. THANK YOU AND I HOPE YOU GIVE THIS A READ OVER :D
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The only problem with this novel is the name of the mc is not Bob when it clearly should have been bob however apart from that this is my favourite new novel after manaless magician.
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let me comment my tags for this book -humor-OP MC (he's not really that strong but...)-Master - Disciple relationship- Dangerous Girls- Another powerful and dangerous heroines - yandere master?- did I already mention how dangerous they are? haha well Goodluck MC I'll pray for your soul.
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need more, more , give this a chance, you won't regret it. it will keep whoever is translating this novel alive and get good money because this is a good novel
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