Revelations (Fireoiny + Pinleaf)

All I can imagine are strong enemies being like: "Death Ray!!!!"And then Lu like: "Do you want some soup, sir? It's free of charge!"hahaha

Caution!I've made a mistake and there is a lot of info dump in the early chapters. Although I cannot guarantee it, I am doing my best not to repeat this in the future. This story revolves on the Main Character Nile who transmigrated in the world full of zombie. I will focus on him and his development. As a newbie author, I know I will make a lot mistakes during this journey. I apologize in advance for that. I am open for critics(no harsh words please), that way I know where I am lacking and what should I improve more. If you have any suggestions and tips to improve my writing, please do tell me about it.

its goodMC has strong backgroundMC is not so op that he can defeat an elder of sectcharacters are not idiotthe reason i rate it is because its good

I love Entertainment Industry Novels So go you and pleaseeee continue this and dont drop because even though I havent read its the entertainment industry and a systemWhat can be better <3

After marathon reading this, i can only say "WTF is this. This is soooo gooooodddddd"Reason? 1. MC is Smart and Witty2. Mc identity make us expect a good and complex plot (a beggar, an illegitimate prince, and a mystic. Mystic is someone that people regard as calamity)3. He solved problem with his brain, and this is not just face slapping among young master. And his brain isn't made of d1ck. Not harem seeking transmigrator 4. Author give us a really solid background story, so we can expect a really good story development and world background5. This story is heavy at first, but slowly become more mild. Some comedic undertone, and some mystery is a good spice to make the story more engagingAt first, i only voted this because other novel in what's next is too trashy. But now, after i tested it, i fall deeply in love with this novelI envy this novel future reader. The won't have to hang on the cliff with only around 30 chapter. They can have a feast and happily read this. Hahhh,,,

Interesting enough to be followed and makes on read more as the story develops. questions are popping up as one reads further. There are questions to the many-threading story as claimed since there seemed to be many stories  all being developed along the way.