Red Doughnut: As a Martial Father, I Wish to Teach You All!

if only this novel had a half decent translation then it would have been awesome but it is ruined now all the troop level and potential all mixed up ??

Overall, a novel with good ideas but poor character design. After being framed and sentenced to death for murder, the MC- a violent gang boss- traveled to a parallel world to become part of a police investigation team. He is randomly tied to a system, but when catching criminals, he relies on forced plot development (instead of using brains). I do not like the MC's personality (brash and rude like a gangster); in fact, the original police officer (whose body MC transmigrated into) seemed to have a much better personality compared  to MC. I was looking forward to this since we don't have good Chinese detective webnovels (most are Japanese like "Shinrei Tantei Yakumo"), but I was disappointed (my rating was already +1 for having the game system, but character development turned out to be too poor).

What a hateful story.. At the current act, I'm dropping this. No more read this kind of story... It is just not into my liking. So I'm done...

I'm enjoying the story much to my surprise. Grammar needs to be polished though, but all in all it's my cup of tea.. Hope you would improve your writing skills I suggest.. Or get an editor or just a proof reader that would be perfect.. Nothing much to say about some plotholes. Nevertheless, it's good.

Wait, let us relax a bit. For those of you who just read the first 20 chapters and think you've got the story all figured out, you couldn't be more wrong. The mc doesn't go an as a simp but eventually has people simping all over him from different directions. It's quite an interesting novel showing how he transforms using his martial arts into a confident and very powerful character

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