writing quality: Smooth reading with very few grammer mistakes.Story development: Well paced story however the direction is unclear giving a mysterious yet confusing feeling, leaving one curious.Character design: Characters are unique with in depth personal traits and quirks. Characters are described both physically and mentally.Updating stability: 1 chapter per day however it is I'll tril read World background: Mostly the school is what the plot js currently surrounded around. However, there are hints and facts proving or portraying the world as an alternate earth.
Cultivation is non existent. Everyone wants to kill you on sight. The Detective’s intuition is so supernatural that the author doesn’t need evidence. The 2 girls are annoying.Honestly dont try to do more than what you can handle author. Stick with the power fantasy sect building and it would have been better than what this is.
This is so amazing it felt as if I was watching a movie, I'm not interested in cars but this book did something to my brain, I love the grammar, the description everything is nicely done, Great job ?
Nice one! No grammar mistakes! loved to see more chapters and more 'action' with succumbs! and plot is also good! hoping MC 'smash' anna, it my selfish request!
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