Hello guys. Author here. This is my first time in attempting writing other than my exams. So that's how big of a newbie I am. So if you are willing to give some constructive criticism be my guest. For the people who don't like my story sorry but I'm not sorry. For the people who like the story please drop in a review or a comment that would be appreciated. If I make some mistake please let me know what it is I'm totally new to this. Thank you for the read. I appreciate it.
so far what you have written is pretty solid for a fan fic. keep up the good writting and please dont try to inject the MC into the main story of the anime, alot of fan fics try that and it ruins the story. something like a while that is happening the mc is doing something major to the side is always good.
As I'm not that great in writing I will just say what I think is annoying for a reader. This (Mom:,Dad:) it's annoying, you can improve by getting rid of it and use something else that will help readers to identify who speaks at the moment. That's all, I'm looking forward for your improvement.
