the writing quality is good so far, the translation quality as well. the only issue I have, is that the first chapter is not a real chapter, not even half a chapter. also... only 20 chapters(19, really) for free in trial read? I will use one free fast-pass a day, but that's about it. at least give us 40 chapters to get propperly hooked... as for the low rating: there is almost No world design, as it is reallity so far, so 1* there. updating, also 1* so far, cause no updates. char design is 3*, because at least we have a normal person as the MC. writing quality is 4*, i noticed small Errors here and there, but waaaay less than in most novels. and Story developement i gave 4* because it is relatively fast paced, with decend amount of information about the MC, his sister and a friend. all without filler. so Overall 2.6*