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Oops, Love in Progress
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(Sigaw ng dalawang kaibigan tumakbo sila patungo dito)
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As Sven tried to take off the ground, he realized that a little too late, as he started to tumble and roll down the side of the hill. Luckily, he didn't hit too much, but it still hurt a lot.
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Booking a room in the same hotel, staying near u tilted the budget of the month for me.
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"You don't think I can get a girl?" I smirked.
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So what's wrong with taking the back streets?
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Kiki rowed forward a few times. "Yes, I do." She tiredly replied. "But can you please just calm down and give me a little break?" I just woke up and you're telling me to row a boat with both of us in to to a deserted island?"
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Since I can review myself, lol. Thanks for reading! Lemme just say some things. Try reading these before making criticism I suppose:_The words and phrasings used, or things that happen aren’t mistakes. One of the tags of this book is mystery, so there are most likely no ‘accidental’ words or sentences; those are intentional. Same goes for ‘plot holes’; things that aren’t discussed or don’t come into play will probably be explored in later chapters/arcs. Also, I'm only human. So, errors can occur but I’ve triple checked from chapters 1-100 and everything should be fine. The errors would come from me updating daily, so I’ll probably fix them at a later date when I catch them but obviously I will try not to make them in the first place._Character decisions aren’t mistakes. This is what a character would say or do in a said situation. What you think might happen may very well differ from what I have in mind. It can mean the characters did or said something wrong, or didn't do the best possible thing; that’s the point. They’re built with flaws, goals, dreams, traits and their own experiences. Boo me, not my precious, precious characters._The pacing I have for this story I think fits perfectly with the story I want to tell. There are reasons for slow moments and reasons for fast ones. It does have actions scenes in it but this is not a fast-paced action novel. It's about the characters, their own developments, mysteries and their journey. _If on the off chance you find any spelling errors or anything, comment on it, I'll fix it asap._And last but not least, please, please, please, have a wonderful day, stay hydrated and get enough sleep. Happy readings~
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It was so gooood. The pacing is enough to understand the story. ?Update pleaseee! ?
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to much face-slaping bullshit everyone in the story has around 3 braincells that's includes the mc  and too much cliche .the only good thing is the world building

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