O Barão do tempo

this novel s garbage. ifs an embarrassment. the first 3 chapters are about the system. that's fine. chapter 4 to 24 (so 25 chapters in total) are about a karate duel between the mc and a random arrogant young master. Yep, 25 chapters. its that long, because it's all about the young master shouting "do you dare? wow how dare you" and everyone's reaction

Loved it...but it just....the plot needs to be more original ...not the main plot but the sub plots...if you konw what i mean. and also the writing quality needs to be somewhat improve.

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When you have finished reading the first chapter (which is where the story begins), you will be left wondering what took place because the story is rather original, the writing is excellent, there are no errors, and the plot is really intriguing.I love how the main character (MC) was designed to have a one-of-a-kind personality with a pinchof craziness.I am excited to readthe rest of this story.

AS A SANATANI & GAURAV VAINAV DAS I AM RECOMMEND THIS TO KNOW AVATAR OF LORD WRITER PLZZ ALSO ADD 24 AVATRS OF LORD MAHAVISHNU THAT Guru Gobind Singh gives the life account of following Avatars in the composition:[1]Mach AvtarKacch AvtarNar AvtarNarayan AvtarMaha Mohini AvtarBairah AvtarNarasingh AvtarBavan AvtarParasram AvtarBrahma AvtarRudra AvtarJalandhar AvtarBisan (Dattatreya) AvtarBisan AvtarArihant Dev (Rishabh Dev) AvtarManu Raja AvtarDhanantar Vaid AvtarSuraj AvtarChandra AvtarRam AvtarKrishna AvtarNar (Arjuna) AvtarBaudh AvtarNihkalanki (Kalki) Avtar

A few seconds later Yu Yan was shocked to hear an angry yell from behind followed by a loud crash.