NTR School: S Rank Student

after finished the raw I found author ended the story hastly there is tons of unsolved questions with out answers  , last 70 chapters have no meaning just MC keep getting stronger and stronger without Equal and no challenge. even author said he quickly finished the story . story not worth reading

Please don't drop it is a wonderful story. The main character is not the usual psychopath, and that is very refreshing. the system actualy is not just some being that exists for no reason and is actualy a main character.

They’re deleting every review to fluff the numbers. The real rating of this novel is 2.2. Don’t look at any of the higher reviews. This novel was dropped and replaced other options all out of the greed of webnovel and Tofu. This novel is trash and racist. Don’t read it at all.

Tl:DR C+, Has potential, take a binge when it hits 75 chapters or so to see how it develops.The Good: the same old good rpg system in a cultivation world concept with a solid twist. The basic premise of this novel is well thought out and the author has spent some time to flush it out in the chapters. The Meh: like many others in its category the novel needs an editor. In its current form the novel reads like it was written by a high school freshman. I understand that the author is not a native English speaker, so kudos to you friend for putting the effort into this work, but you have lots of room to improve. Look at Once a Human, Now a Paracite as proof that improvement is possible. God speed.The Bad: the adage of "show, don't tell" went out the window. The pacing of the naritive needs improvement and the ******* and release cycle might as well not exist. In its current form reading this novel is interesting but unsatisfying.

Sooooooooooo Gooooooooood ....................................................................................................................

RAW RAW RAW RAAW RAW RAW RAW RAW RAW RAW PLZZZZZZZZ............................................................................................