My Stripper Mate

I really love this book. Can't wait to read more of Killiad and Elle's moment. ❤️❤️❤️ Keep it up Sparrow ❤️

uhhhhh who is saying this book is elite? This book is bad. Like really bad. Don't read this book if you want logic, consistency, character growth, a good plot. In it's current state it's really weak. I donno if this is spoilers since it's literally the first 5 chapters but he very first plot point is that the MC gets accepted into the holy church for being the youngest mage to awaken and have a compatibility with light. The head priest of the church who is accepting him as his disciple decides not to give him a guard or a trinket to save his life or anything for that matter. We then learn there is a Head priest of the village that the MC lives in who has a son who also happened to awaken with light compatibility at the same time but he's a lil old so not so cool. The head Priest of the entire church says nope I'm not gonna accept him in the church he has to go the long way to get into the church. The problem with this is that we immediately after this fact learn how rare light users are.... so why didn't the head priest accept him? This leads to obvious hatred in the sons heart and conflict arises but you see how forced that was? How illogical that whole scenario was? It's like listening to a 5 yo lie to you using 5 yo logic but you are an adult and you can see right through it. Then there's the word padding, it starts right in the beginning. The author will blatantly rewrite but slightly reword sentences that are just reiterating the same thing over and over. Stuff you normally see in novels after they go platinum sometimes.I don't understand how this is ranked so high.... This book reminded me why I like books that have been published and have editors and an author who rereads their own work and makes multiple drafts. I hope the author goes back and rewrites this cause it seems like there's good ideas in there it just feels like whoever wrote this is in elementary school (very rookie writing mistakes). It's like that. I hate leaving bad reviews cause I'd much rather love a book than feel like I've been wasting my time.

It's an interesting story. I hope to see it continue as I ran out of chapters to read just as it began to pick up. I rated it the way I did because I need more content to go on.

this is an awesome novel, awesome word settings and background...I feel bad about it having such low collections, idk if author can, but he should re-upload it to gain more readers... It would be a shame if this novel is dropped due to low support.

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Holy crap this is good, so good that it keeps the end of my hair stand up. thanks for your hard and beautiful work besides i  really like this novels ;can't wait to read more of this novel.... I should have had waited until there is more chapters..... I like it too much♥