My Fluids make women stronger.

Was honestly very excited for the first 40 or so chapters, unfortunately the story feels incredibly bogged down bu the terrible secret identity execution and the logical leaps such as “i want my wife to be successful on her own, so I’ll just support her behind her back to invalidate her efforts” I’m paraphrasing but it can’t help but feel like that. Even if you think the story would end if the mc were to reveal his identity you can’t justify dragging out unnecessary and mind numbing segments of character development for no reason.Overall: Strong start but i prefer reasonable characters and good pacing.

I like this novel and I am happy that this novel got picked because it's really amazing and alot of people are sad that my senior is to shady did not get picked and I can assure you that it's also a good novel, these two books are amazing and when I see someone post a one star review I am one hundred percent sure they didn't even read them, because if you had read both of them you won't even care and that's why I like this community and that's why this book still has a 4.6 star review unlike the other novel who got a 3.6 star review.

First 9 chapters are nearly unbearable due to the absolutely moronic behavior from every character shown such as:-Dude has super rare ability of map/strategize evolution routes but doing so consumes his evo potential... so he proceeds to spend about 1/3 of his points before saying, "Wait, I can't use any of those paths/combinations since I don't have to genes."-Dispite all the technology and progress in humanity, the people in charge of assigning 'trash' fates to the BILLIONS of people do so in person... at their dinner tables... through holographic calls.... Who would even EAT AT A DINNER TABLE in the future so why wait for that instead of email/messenger type communications or just having the bloody schools had out the info at their computer desk... like what??-Advance space faring civilization, believes a student cheated on test so the classroom of CHILDREN with their teacher proceed to go over his questions that the holographic quantum computer graded as correct as if they people who NEEDED to prove their intellengce and correct an ai.-Story constantly states that higher evolution equates to light speed thought process and even more accurate memory functions, everyone assumes its possible for a barely super human [0.4] to vastly outpace a 2.2 super human in the test like it makes more sense than other options so they redicule/threaten/prevent said student from gene test.

This novel really can't be seen as more than an amateurish fanfic.Ideas are copied, events rushed, the usual clichés and tropes are there, being its bread and butter... and unfortunately, the translation needs some more work, too.If you have nothing else to read, you can give it a try, but I'd suggest to first check out the novels from which the author "took inspiration" from, as "Perfect World" and "Sovereign Of The Three Realms

Well, this was a real pain to finish this book. The translation and editing was abysmal. The whole begining was even MTL oO (around 60 chapters I if I recall correctly)Overall, the story is messy, and the editing makes it worse. You keep wondering if the story is not edited correctly, or if it's just bad. Well, the book was mostly OKish, but I found all the super hidden plots revealed within the second half of the book super cringy and meh. I'm pretty sure the author was really pumped up after mixing these elements in the book, but they were not good imho. Last but not least, the ending was awful as fuc.k, like most cultivation novels.

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