My beloved master

Overall it’s a pretty good novel, especially when you started writing 1 week ago.Although it’ not the best, it good potential. Wiritng mistakes is close to 0Slow start but it starts picking up at chapter like 14 I think.Personally I think if you develop a good cultivation system with names and allat later in the novels it would be pretty good.

Honestly. I love the concept but the start of the novel is rough. Dialogue screams chunnybu and tonnes of overly convenient scenarios happen one after another. That being said the novel does pick up ALOT after a while and the story becomes enjoyable when the side characters realize they aren't in a low quality shounen manga.

Titled Elves were creatures with less than half of their Heritage filled with the Elven Bloodline who belonged to other races. The Heritage[1] is an infinate space which contains all the Bloodlines in a creature.

On second thought, I can't avoid Mark forever. This would make me look weak in front of him, which I am sure not. Moreover, I want to meet Aunt Rachel and Uncle Rosh it's been so long, I am excited to see Aunt Rachel's reaction after seeing me. I am sure she'll be totally stunned after seeing me like this. She always said I was doing injustice to my beauty by being under dressed. I wonder what she will say now. With the excitement to meet them, I walked down towards the living room. The Kerchers' had finally arrived while I was walking down and mom and dad were welcoming them.

I needed to know more about Master's past. Perhaps it would lead me to him one day. That island probably held several clues.

Amoeba's foreboding feeling would prove to be right in the next 2 billion years of her life...