Well, This one novel is the the one that i truly don't know what to say!Right, I Don't know what to say and only laugh at it.Reading it to the current last chapter(20) i only feel laughing to Death.First of all i must say that as a truly newbie noob Writer, Author Tried his best to this point and i happy for him BUT the problem is that Almost many of these Friends of ours have lacking in the foundational matters like comprehension Meaning of Cultivation , Skill , Character Design and Storyline. In my view being an new Author Doesn't means that They can have problems in even storyline and story.Lacking in grammar aspectLacking in Descriptions of Events and scenesLacking in CreativityLacking in Storyline and EventsLacking in Foundations.Author doing this in as Hobby. Or at least i didn't he wants anythings So there are not many problems for he continue this as he's gaining Experience. Author please first of all create your events better, we hardly can grasp what happen in every events. then if your writing this so please put more time on it and at least do cultivation and missions properly.
