Love at Side

It was nice reading this until the repitition. Now we as readers have to give up twelve spirit stones for "premium" chapters. I am dropping this as easy as the MC leveling up.

Caught up with the author's latest chapters, and I can only say— it's great! The beginning of the novel started slow but be patient, it will take time for it to accelerate. The protagonist is great, it has potential. At first, he may not seem impressive, but as chapters passed by you will gradually see his advantages. For the other characters, I want to see more interaction between them because most of the time it's always female characters I see. I want to see more of the people of the Twilight City.For the romance, I'm still not sure if there is because it's really ambiguous, and there's still no official relationship until now, but I already have a ship I've voted on.This is your sign to read it, just give it a try. The latest chapter is really a cliffhanger, I'll come back when it's already finished.

Important message to all potential readers please read.Hi author here first I want to say thank you for reading my book it’s my second book but it really feels like my first. Im stIll new to this my writing is still Rocky but i do intead to improve as long as I keep going.(So plz forgive the shameless 5 stars)Second thing is that I’ve marked PlaceHolder Shaman as a male leading series when really it’s a female leading series I don’t wanna miss lead anyone but I did this because the male category has more to choose from were the female category is very limited in it’s selection. Placeholder is not a romance nor is it Really a fanatsy it’s an action series with a lead that just happens to be a girl. I hope this isn’t a deal breaker for you and I hope you’ll join me for this journey.

Everything feels too forced and rushed. Too many mistakes in sentences where some words have nothing to do with that sentences which gets really confusing. The logic/reasoning is not throughly thought out because the reasons don’t match with how the author tries to portray the main character. Author needs to worry about quality above quantity because you say one thing which is enough but you want to add more to it which sometimes makes it confusing or unnecessary, there is probably a better way to explain this but not coming to my head right now. The author makes too many side comments as part of the narration of the story which brings down the quality. Also in your narrative you blame characters for their characteristics, which you created, don’t do that........ I have also noticed you try to add to many unnecessary stuff to a sentence and you end up combining two or three thoughts together which don’t make sense...... The biggest problem seems to be structuring the world building/ character building, you mention **** ton of stuff like realms and rare items when people have no idea what they are, I understand you say they are rare but that’s too much for the beginning of the story, it doesn’t help your reads give value to things, what I mean by that is as people read a story they tend to make sense of the world in the story and what has what value, but the way you write it devalues the “super rare items”. Don’t take offense this is a honest review you should try to fix many of these problems if not all, there are other problems but I lost track writing all these. I hope the author improves and fixes his/her previous chapters, I would suggest reading translated novels to get a better idea of how a cultivation novel is structured and there are some top original cultivation novels on this website too.

fantastic story. i am sad that this is paused or discontinued, i really loved the concept here and enjoyed the story a lot. i gope the author returns to this story some day.

you get better everytime, try your best, don't give up the novel it's quite good for my opinion, some gramitical errors but still I Like the story