Lil M - How is rapping this dangerous?!!!
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Marcus, a 19-year-old struggling rapper with a failing career and a tough life under his demanding Aunt Jaz, finds himself at rock bottom after a viral meme ruins his latest track. When a chance encounter with an enigmatic homeless man leads to a shocking gift—the Von System—Marcus’s life shifts into overdrive. This mysterious, video game-like interface reveals his stats, assigns dangerous missions, and rewards him with digital currency called Flow. As Marcus completes quests—from making amends with his childhood crush, Jakirah, to targeting rivals—he must balance his desire for rap glory with the brutal realities of street life. With each mission, the Von System propels him further into a dark, unpredictable world where every choice risks his soul.

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I love most of this, the world building is good as a lo of things are/being fleshed out. I’m excited about the 1000 quest that are hopefully going to be answered. The only minor issue I have with this novel is that it’s sometimes leaves me confused with it going around the place. (This could just be an issue with my comprehension ability.) I hope theirs won’t be dropped like many similar novels.
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It's generic trash, don't get why people defend it, i see a couple of bots in the reviews as well, pls don't translate any more of this type except if it is actually good
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This Novel is a gem, especially for gamers who like to be a support character. Or a healer.And this suit me very well, since i ALWAYS pick non combatants class, but not a crafter too.This is a slice of life story about a genius musician who love wholeheartedly to music and the instruments, but not naive. They wonder the game world to spread joy and sorrow with music as their medium to tell their story straight to listener heart.That's all about it. Since i don't want to spoil the story plot.This story ain't perfectly written, and maybe not your fav, especially to chunnin reader. Since MC is a pacifist. But, being a pacifist isn't mean a cowardice. As Corporal Desmond T Doss from US prove it in WW2.
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This is a good story. I hope improvements will come and uploading chapters bit faster will help you establish a good foundation for your novel
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1. this book is murdering the english language2. interesting characters at first, but no development3. we are just dropped into a world, there's no information4. the story is not badconclusion: it is readable and zan be a good book, if you have free time and nothing to read, but to absolutely say that you have to read this book I wouldn't go that far.
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