Innocent Paw

very good progress......................................

Feels like author is purposely seeing how mad they can make readers by rushing the power curve all the while making the MC and other characters as dumb as dregs.  This cheat could have been used with a light touch to slowly build an interesting story with depth.  But no, he'll be crushing planets by ch 40.  While interesting clan building novels get rejected this is the kind of novel that will get chosen because people want a 60 ch novel.  Lame.

荒野探秘：神级扮演，开局麒麟纹身                                                                                                                                    

Firstly your a hard working author. Secondly the mc is rational and ambitious with no moral restrains. Thirdly Im hooked.

5 star for u now give me more updates...............................................................YDysfzufxfuxgjgjgjxjfhffjxzfhydzzfhzfxjggcjgcjhfxfhxfhxfhfjfjxgcgjgxj.. .....

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