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Immortal World System

Immortal World System
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Genres:
UrbanActionAdventureComedyHarem
Tags:
System Action Adventure Comedy Harem Cultivation Beasttaming Weaktostrong Immortal Nocheats
Novel Info
  • Author:
  • _yuvi_
  • Status:Ongoing

Summary

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Hao Ren a regular otaku walkup and found himself lying on the hospital bed. He found that he had an immortal world system accompanying him. But,...
Whenever he tried to gain points by killing insects or cattle.
System notify him: "You have killed an insect, 0 experience points are rewarded"
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the system said hauntingly: "Don't take me as leveling system of novel where you level up martial arts killing insect and cattle, humph, you have to practice, handwork in particular field to get experience points"...
Will the system brings Hao Ren fortune or bad luck?

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Hilary Julian's avatar
March 19,2022
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I think everything is a bit fast and I love grammar so you understand next problem.
The character explanation was fine but I like a little more details.
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Antony Walter's avatar
March 19,2022
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I like how the author made plot to tell the education related stuff, it's hilarious to me
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Yale Copperfield's avatar
March 19,2022
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i love itttt! because of the comedy as much as because of the adventure! im having a good time reading it! keep it up author! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
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Walter Raphael's avatar
March 19,2022
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Some parts are a bit chaotic and confusing. I also think the flow is too quick and the story needs more descriptions.However,the idea has potential.

Keep it up!
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Armand Bruce's avatar
March 19,2022
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Good story. The main character a bit wishy washy. But I believe in character development. Hopefully he can become strong as soon as possible! Many typo. But its okay!!
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Michaelia Bessemer's avatar
March 19,2022
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