Immortal Shopping Mall

This is my obligatory author review. I like my own story, hopefully you do, too.

Review as at chapter 20
It's a calming read. The idea of an immortal shopping mall is refreshing and the idea that Lin has let the other cultivators start their own business or just hang around in there is a good take unlike the common indifferent trope store owners usually have in these types of novels.

I'd appreciate more interaction among the cultivators , go deeper play around with it and even the different types of businesses they have opened. For that lively wholesome mall feel the characters need to be more interactive and fleshed out.

But all in all it's a good novel with potential all the  best in the trails ahead and hopefully Lin Feng gets the option to buy cultivation knowledge and not just increase his realm.

Probably the best ‘store based’ novels on the platform; excellent writing and great update stability!

The characters are well made, but a little bare on backstory though there are only 20 chapters thus far so that could change.

Im very excited to see where this story will go!

This book is really well written, it is thrilling the deeper you dive into the book. I really hope you plan on doing a sequel.

I don’t mind Axel groveling a bit but don’t want him to miss out on his mate. More for Ashley not miss out on her mate (Axel does seem serious about her now).

Absolutely awesome enjoyed every word of this book great job author and I will be looking for more in the future.