Pretty good so far, the writing quality is good. The fast-pace doesn't feel rushed, rather it's effective.It's a little bit rough, but like author said, he just upload it and plans on editing it afterward.The only thing that'd bug me so far would be the world background, but I guess since it's only the beginning, all of that will be further developed in the future.The story's quite intriguing, too.The story has potential--I mean, i'm no expert, that's for sure, but from what I see, it has potential to grow well if author keeps it up.Good job.
