I Became a Genius Swordsman in the Pretty Girl Game

I think the writing is a bit too formal and hard to read... am I the only one feeling this... or am I simply inexperienced

Agree with you. This author knows how to build suspense.

So far so good one of the most harem/action/transmigration I read good story I like MC how he do not secretly not showing his true abilities, he show his true abilities from start and expand he's conection & harem at the same getting recognition from the people because I have story that most mob people are blind on the MC because MC not showing his true abilities he always get bullied with their mouth or in a fight then they lose this one have good story showing true abilities from the start getting recognized by people around the world so no more bullies with their trash mouth of the people and at the same time his harem getting big and his fan club too I wish her master would be one of his harem the story so far all good I wish this one have a good ending like getting a clear ending other mediocre ending not having a clear ending were MC did not show who she end up with with his harem I give this 4.9/5 star also thanks from translating this good harem story keep up the good work

So far so good I like how MC shows his true abilities from the start and have good story one of the most good action/fantasy/harem/transmigration I read so far I give it 4.8/5 star

Thank for translating this good harem novel it's really have good story I wish the ending also have good ending like clear story were MC married all the heroines and I wish one of them is her master too

Other have mediocre ending don't have clear ending like didn't show MC who she end up with rush ending no harem ending with harem story I wish this one jabe good ending and side story too like after married side story from every heroines with their children's

Anyway thank a lot from translating this good harem story I enjoy it a lot keep up the good work

The narrative presents a fascinating dynamic逆转了性别角色, alongside an engaging main character and supporting cast. The new translator has done an excellent job. If you previously tried this novel and were disappointed due to the translation, I highly recommend giving it another chance, as the updated version is truly impressive. ?

This novel held promise, but unfortunately, it falls short due to poor writing and a subpar translation. The high rating is misleading; it's a below-average read marred by a frustrating translation experience. Although there are some moments where the protagonist's character development is attempted, the sudden power-ups within the first chapter feel unjustified and rob the narrative of any genuine tension or growth. The interactions with female characters are contrived and unrealistic, with little depth or charm.

The harem aspect doesn't save the novel for me either, as the supporting characters are one-dimensional and lack substance. Their motivations and personalities feel superficial, making it difficult to care about their relationships or invest in their stories. The protagonist's enigmatic nature is undermined by inconsistent actions and unclear motivations, which hinder reader engagement. The action sequences are lackluster, and the overall pacing lacks the excitement one might expect from a thriller.

In conclusion, this book squanders its potential, resembling countless others on the platform that could have been much more captivating if executed better. It's a disappointment to see a mediocre offering pass off as a promising read.