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WARNING: 18++
Contains Sexually explicit content and vulgar language along with steamy gifs and pictures.
I am writing this review only after 18 chapters, so it may change?. A warlord,who is getting humiliated from stage 1,? Even if it's in the name of lifesaving grace, there should be limits.. Also what's with the family constantly blocking his sword for their enemies ?. Just not my cup of tea. I had great expectations but this was frustrating . That's why I wrote this review ?.
im not really good at making reviews so all i got to say is this is one of the best concepts for a story and has one of my favorite main characters so far and i hope it gets the attention it deserves (yes im getting on my alts to review to show that i am sorry and hope it gets more people to read this)
Characters are one dimensional, the Mc is supposed to have "positive" karma but acts like a normal teenager and doesn't do much for the reader to be invested in him. The world building is poor and relies on established tropes
i would say I have read 10 chapters of this book but the story isn't going anywhereIt can't got me within 10 chapters, like, almost every novels I have read even the bad one got me to read them until I was bored within 10 chapters but this novel couldn't and anthe mc personality is not likable at all within these 10 chapters that I've read
So I want to ask , that does future just 1000years has everything extraordinary in such abundance that you can get SSS talent and divine treasures so easily?I understand that 1000years of highly efficient progress would definitely give greater resources especially if something of past which is not available in future is traded but still... there's a limit to that or wouldn't children of top powerhouses of future have MC's level of strength easily.afterall their parents can also get those things wich MC can???