Herothion

did you drop this book? or is it completed I just noticed there is  o ending xududufufufufud7d7d7f7f7f7f7f7f7f7d7d7f7f7f7f7f7fufufufuc

just trashchecked ahead on MTL novels just plain garbage .                                                                                                    .

Clearly the Author has some bias towards other harem members.. *Nuwa* cough.. while other members only get mentioned by name and not having any lines. Xiao Wen was my favorite from the start and now she barely gets mentioned and just fades in the backgroudAlso author kinda bummed out the plot of the Liena's fate organization of the earth realm. They are trying to open the fate kingdom as their goal when it just suddenly opened when MC kidnap a girl and Fate king was like "kill him for me". meh

I have really enjoyed reading this book. I hope you will resume updating the story soon. As for the editing, make things easy on yourself and partner with a volunteer or hired editor. Even professional writers use another set of eyes to catch their errors and make constructive suggestions for the flow of the story.This is an excellent work. Please continue developing the story, characters and plot. And, don’t forget to come back with new chapters!??

its a story about a villager coming to a town and finding beautiful girls and describing them in again and again to waste words and chapters.

great work, the poems are fantastic. deals with love, heartbreak, depression. topics we all face in our everyday life. so feel free to read.