Her Only Hope

The story was my favorite until the author decided that he was bored with the story and ended it in one chapter with plenty of story left to go in my opinion.

This novel really has the best first chapter, and when reading the second chapter i really got a hint of the authors fetish, B*S*, hahahahahah

QILIN REALM-- THE WORD BUILD IS AMAZING. gotta say the writers worked really hard, the descriptions and the cover, the synopsis and the plot, the pace, its all commendable! i'd love seeing more content, tried my best to not spoil this stuff but id love to complete this book as soon as my tests are done with!

Another interesting story. When you read the synopsis you want to read more about the principal character, and when you start reading the chapters you can laugh and imagine the situation itself.An entertaining read. I like it ❤

The core story progression point in this novel is flawed. Lorne wows the king and his attendant with his analyses of current events in the world, despite the fact that it is impossible for him to know anything. The tavern he owns has no customers, as the author points out, while Lorne does not go out, or at least, it isn’t stated or even hinted. Lorne has no personality, heck, we aren’t even given a description of his physical features, ambitions or background. The explanations feel rushed, and aren’t substantial in any way.TL;DR this is a miss.

I used to snort when I saw an author rate their own work 5 stars, but now I embrace the hypocrisy!This is my first attempt at writing since I was 13 and wrote awful, terrible Dragonriders of Pern fanfics. This might not be much better, but ill try.