Hellboy and The Ghost Rider

I don't know much about this story. I didn't manage to get far in it. The fact is that today i simply wasn't in the mood to hear so much about another competition.Why? Why did all those other novels abused such a simple plot line for me/us, reader/s?

Alternate synopsis: "I admired the full moon atop Forbidden City and drank wine at Dongting.Wanderer of Jianghu who does not know my fame, a flying sword can behead with ease."Oh, I butchered the poem, man I suck!Anyway, this is the kind of novel that is really popular in China, but whose popularity here depends upon the translator.The novel is rooted in Chinese myths and legends, and unfortunately most of the novels here with that have a subpar translation. The MC is really intelligent from what I've heard. The novel is certainly a great work, but if the translator doesn't spruce up, we'll get a butchered version. That would be a disservice to the author of this fine work. Something mediocre with a good translation would be better than this fine novel getting a bad TL.By the way, the setting for this novel is around the same as Seeking the Flying Sword Path. If the two translators could collaborate then it would be really great.

webnovel really hides it's stuff deeply, I've been looking for something tho read for days but i just tapped something while not looking and boom I got something else besides what they're trying to shove down my throat

What can I tell you, author? The story at first is pretty good. The only thing that bothers me is the way you rushed things. As soon as the MC wakes up, he runs through the forest, after running through the forest he meets the road where he gets on the bus that takes him back to the orphanage where the children who intimidate him kill him, why would you go back to the same place where they killed you? unanswered. After arriving at the orphanage, the MC is thrown to a military school in minutes where he is registered and it does not take long before he finds an arrogant boy whom the MC is going to kill in a few more chapters, or even go so far as to say that in the next chapter. In short, author, do not rush the story. Things are going too fast. Not even five chapters passed before the MC who is a cowardly boy turned into a cruel one. Yes, two months passed within the world of history, but for the MC and for us it was a matter of seconds.

The novel is decent, not amazing, but not bad, but as I read, I kept on noticing multiple inconsistencies, and also, the MC, Max, is actually an idiot, he has no brains, he’s rash, and thinks pretty much only with his sausage. Early on in the chaps, he says after he got cucked by his friend, he only treats others the way he gets treated, but he completely disregards what he said just a few chaps later. Also, I don’t like the fact that he was flirting with his dad’s wife even though his dad is actually a good guy, that cares for him once again disregarding his previous statements. Like bro, your father was one of the only good guys that actually cared for you, and you trying to Ntr him. For me personally, I stopped reading during at that Prince chapter where he just he gets mad, explodes, and doesn’t even think of the consequences. Once again, this is not a bad novel, it’s just average, you could find a  novel like this everywhere.

Story starts off a little dark so if you aren't quite the type to enjoy that type of stuff I recommend you brace yourself before reading. The grammar is good, but my one major criticism to the author is to space out the paragraphs. No one likes to read giant lumps of text over and over again.