Despite eastern fantasy is not my genre, I like this work. It has a certain potential. The character empowerment system is complete and well described. English grammar may be better, but I hope it will grow day by day. Don't stop writing, this novel may be a really good one!
If anyone is fretting whether to read or not. I suggest u to give it a go. It's worth it.
But there are grammatical mistakes in it. One look at this book one can say it is a ******* work. Even though it is a amatuer it is good.
It is little funny. The story is going with a good flow. The story is good. But the progress of the story depends how the author writes it in the future.
And there are some points where one can gain knowledge too.
Anyways, all the best author. Hope u will do it good and will not disappoint the readers.
This is a nice eastern fantasy story! I recommend it! I’ve never touched eastern fantasy story with male as the MC before, but this is quite refreshing. The beginning has already piqued my curiosity. Writing style wise, I won’t argue much abt the grammar although yes I think there’s a room for improvement. The plot itself is exciting. What I love the most is the character building bcos the author takes their time in building the characters. I can see the distinct personalities between them. And finally, it’s so refreshing to see such a nice family like Qin. I hv enough of my share with evil sisters and concubine. Thank you.
You need to read this if you really like the genre of Easter Fantasy since it had a good character and the pacing of the story is also good. The world itself is also beautiful.
Reading every chapters give you different kind of emotion which is good ! Worth to read!
Nice novel author-san, thou there are some grammatical mistakes. you are writing pretty good and the story is going pretty well. and, I think romance is a bit early and can create some chemistry between characters.
