Gray Wolf And White Wolf

Felt like the story is not yet in the middle part, there's still a few parts that is missing. The creator of the system is still unknown, the guy that controls the self evolving mutant is still unknown a lot of things is still unknown. Once they are shown we probably can put the pieces together. And make the novel less confusing.

I lost my motivation to read this qfter learning that its a discontinued novel thats suks

Bunch of grammar errors.

I'm doing this comment review because of how annoyed I feel at the current moment being a little over halfway through this novel [ch 459.2]. I plan to keep reading for now but I'm overly annoyed, so I want to see if I change my mind once I finish the novel.
Characters/character development: 6/10
'Romantic' relationships for MC: 1/10 (This is my biggest contention for wanting to drop this novel sadly. One of the females is a huge gaslighter, emotional *b*s*r, tries many times to drug MC to seduce him. She is one of the main side characters, so she isn't going away. It's tough to read what is written especially from someone who dealt with emotional abusers like that, author is treating it like a fetish. fyi, MC hasn't reprimanded her once yet and allows it to actively occur.)
Plot: 8/10
World building: 8/10
Imagery: 7/10
Enjoyment: 5/10
Overall: 5/10 (it's sad really, because author can cook up a good plot, but sucks at romance. One character ruins this novel.

Kang Seo Yul's best friend is an author. They met because he was basically the only reader of the novel the author wrote, after a round of drinking with the author he ends up as the main character of the munchkin book his friend just finished.

The "twist" is that he doesn't have a system, which was originally the MC's main strength. Now he has to overcome the original MC's power without a system.

Harem tropes are there, although not as bad as some novels. Lots of lying and misunderstandings happen, that make people always believe he is stronger than he really is.