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The story is good in my opinion but it needs work. Although it isn't the worst grammar I have seen in a story, it is far from the good either. I suggest the Author go back and fix the errors or get an editor for the story. The editor could be a reader or given by WebNovel because I think they can suggest editors. This isn't social media or a game where grammar doesn't matter much, it is a book/novel where ever errors can change how the story is read and confuse readers like when it kept saying "gun" when the MC was forging a sword and another time a spear.

Waste of time and effort. As soon as the tournament arc comes it's like a completely different author takes over. Cliches and a complete lack of effort in utilizing the "system".

Time to thicken my skin, and toot my own horn! If you're looking for an epically-scaled, breathlessly exciting, impeccably written Eastern Fantasy/Xuanhuan/Xianxia novel, you've come to the right place! No, no! Don't press the back button! Ok, look, if that's not enough, how about, an adorable loli sister? No, you swing the other way? What about a really, really cool senpai with silky, long red-hair who can kill thousands with but a gaze? No? Okay, I see you're asexual. Oh boy, you're gonna love this, I know what gets your rocks rocking - an insane plot, a sick backstory, realistic characters, fancy weapons, an adorkable pet sidekick! Still NO!!? Bah, I see you can't be saved. (But seriously, this story is gold). Well, if you're seriously not interested, I still encourage you to give this a go. If you love it, that's another thing to look forward to when you wake up in the morning! (If you hate it, please PM me, let's talk about it so I can become a better author!) Cheers