Game Quest

Veldona is very unhinged. The MC being constantly perplexed is a great touch to this story.

I very much do enjoy the writing of this, and as a big fan of fun fantasy and isekai (also fox women) i am a biased enjoyer of your work, cant wait for your updates!- huntressbacchhae

An interesting story with lots going on. I particularly like that the main story arc never gets bogged down with excess filler and the author manages to keep the story well paced and interesting

I like the way you have your power hierarchy system set up and how the abilities work. Feels like it borrows enough from anime and fantasy tropes while still making it original. My only gripe would be there's a bit too much exposition especially about how powers work down to the gameplay level. When the characters talk about their abilities like there powers in a game it's a little immersion breaking.
But other than that it's great!

i really like the way the author accentuates the characters and give them each their individual personalities and overall a good read 9.9/10

This was an interesting series, and I was pleasantly surprised, but it did have some errors such as grammatical and capitalization errors, such as inn being fully capitalized whenever said, but not too many to make it unreadable. I think that Chang being like completely shocked when he sees a naked girls body is accurate and fine for his character, although the fanservice seems unnecessary when describing Vendola naked in some parts. of the series. There are some references  that just dont make sense, and even when expanded upon just should be replaced. Other than that its basically a typical fantasy Isekai, pretty good read and I was pleasantly surprised. Try it out.