FALL FOR MAFIA | Completed | JK | V

Intriguing start. I can't wait to see her grow, to read more about her progress and I'm in anticipation of the steamy romance between her and her mate.

The story itself and the plot is interesting.There is a lack of character development and there’s no point in putting in highiq tag if he’s gonna rely on the system for solving all cases.I’m satisfied with the overall story but just the character himself I’m concern about.

I was enjoying myself, but then the story started getting rather long-winded. With this and the ****ty 'let's hear how the bystanders doubt the mc' meme, I'm just about done with this story. Thanks but no thanks, I decided I don't need this story anywhere near me. If you want examples, I'm too tired rn to give them, just read the first ~20 chapters if you haven't already and you'll notice it too.

I like the idea and I like how he is growing stronger and stronger. Didn't like how it the story went till chapter 20 but it got better afterwards. Now I have read all 40 chapters and hope it gets picked. It's better then all the other novels in trail at the moment.

This story is honestly good so far, it's not perfect as no story is obviously, yet it's honestly good enough to compel you to read more. The only down-side is it's really short so far, the length of the chapters make it feel a bit longer which I approved of, however it doesn't change the short amount of chapters so far. So all I can hope for is the chapter release schedule somehow picks up. I love the fact the main character is by no means a pure innocent person. In fact he's surprisingly cruel, some might say what he did stretched beyond the borders of humane, they certainly did. I enjoyed it however. He's finally been granted the power to not hide his darkness within, per-say. So I'm excited to see how the story progresses.Good luck with your story and I hope you don't drop it, keep it up Author-san. The Dao of the Psychopath harem master is strong in you.

Evil mc ? Love an mc who is loyal to his goals and motivations and is rational in an immortal with a balance of ruthlessness and merciless nature love it author.