Author, I must've hit the jackpot today because your story is AMAZING! My only problem is, why haven't you hit a 1000 views yet ?! The writing is amazing and the plot is really, really interesting, gives me nostalgia. I love this, DO NOT ABANDON IT OR I WILL FIND YOU IN YOUR SLEEP!The other problem is long paragraphs. Divide them into two or three parts and you'll be fine!