Esa Promesa

Loved the web novel, but there are some things that I really don't like the worlds is like and the obsession with Chinese nationalism. Translation Quality 4 stars. Stability of Updates 5 stars. Story Development 4 stars. Character Design 4 stars. World Background 3 stars.

Frankly I only gave five stars to update stability because of the translators. Otherwise the rest is SHIT. Don't read below is you don't want to be spoiled. SPOILER...... ........OK. So I read the raw and man. This story end at CH 500 or so. For a Chinese story this is already very low. Since generally they reach 900+ at minimum.Still at the start  the story was interesting. The system was OP but he still had some limitations. He was OP but could still be threatened. The characters were funny and had some life. What is more ,it is a single pairing so the fmc had the time to be developed.All that though, is only applicable to 1/3 or half of the novel.Until then, the growth of power was acceptable. Fast but acceptable. But after a while  he began to jump level without any real consolidation. Meaning we readers cannot even appreciate his new level before he jump to another one. This was the first hints that this story was already falling apart.All the side characters began to fall on the way side. The story became stall  many plots were given up without closure.What's more, with his system you would think that myth is the last level? No it isn't. Myth, eternal, master, suprême, chaos. And do you know how long it took him to go from myth to chaos? Less than 40 chapters. ?This should already explain everything.At the end, nothing was explained. The system wasn't, his many inheritances weren't, and so many many many fucking things.To be honest, reading was just a chore for me because I had invested too much and wanted to see the end.Lol even the author gave an excuse note because of how shitty the late arc were. Je recognized that he had basically gave up and was just rushing to end fast

the chapter 447 make me go from completely love to completely hating this novel even if this fic is probably a 3.5. the motive is in the chapter in question(447)mc have his soul intertwined with a alicorn and they are tied to each other forever,it's extremely ridiculous how author make mc go for it without thinking in the consequences, mc is literally marry a horse(it's already who that the alicorn parents have this bond). I find it ridiculous to think that in the future his future lover will never have a relationship more intimate with him than a horse and the same go for the horse. I think author in trying to give mc a good pet only make unecessary drama in doing in this way

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This book is basically a school life, pick up artist, system hunter gate novel. Hope you like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I don't exactly see why the reviews made thus far hype this novel up. The writing quality is decent, but I noticed grammatical issues in just about every paragraph. The update stability is, from what I can see, not great. The last chapter released to the public was 11 days ago. Story Development is actually the best part of this novel, I even gave it 4 stars. Put simply, the pacing is good and I enjoyed reading for quite a while. The protagonist is fun, but other characters feel rather robotic. World background is a generic RPG situation, not much to say.Overall MEH. Felt no intensity in intense moments, and can't really relate to any characters.