Honestly love the book, and it’s really unfortunate that the ending was extremely rushed.Also, it’s like the author completely forgot about the MC’s other women…
So, a novel that’s been “inspired” by Long Live Summons. Well, I’ll be interested to see if this is another Xianxia: I Can Download Fully Leveled Abilities, or if its own thing.
There is a chance you can tell what this story is based on if you don't it doesn't matter, the MC is believable and not too out there considering the events that have taken place.Zombies fill the worldMonsters start to run amokWill he survive this
okay the main character's name I couldn't actually read that much kept changing every other paragraph between Jake and Leon. the HP made no sense he had zero for a couple system updates for a while and then had 10 out of 100. the exercise routine made zero sense but that wasn't the main issue at one point at the beginning he ran 5 mi in 3 hours that is so slow. I just the random writing errors were driving me nuts. admittedly it's not awful story there's some stuff that just doesn't make sense and add up well but it's not bad I'm just very frustrated.
Good stuff so far! The story is intriguing, but I recommend having a better description of events. I feel like you've heard this before but, "show, don't tell." Other than that, it's a good read
I don't like reading long chapters but I was suprise I didn't get bored reading yours. Good character design and the world background got me hooked. Let's go transform into bats.
