Demonic Path: I Can Optimise

This story plot legit gave a stomachache.The guy doesn't even know the concept of low-key, he had to seize every chance to show off like a needy kid for attention , the most stupid thing is that he keeps lying and spitting nonsense without considering the consequences if he was found out ,yet everybody believes it like its normal without even trying to find out if its the truth. Even children books arent this naive .Fk ruined my day again.

The story starts out strong and pretty interesting. A guy from a world of cultivators finds himself reincarnated on earth where chi levels are low. He begins a journey of settling his current body's series of funny and tragic misfortunes from impotence to sudden poverty. All the while he has to restart his journey of cultivation again with extremely limited resources. The story is quite great at the start but then it slowly degrades into forced plots and unreasonable situations which don't match the mc's personality at all to push the harem theme. The reasonable characters seem to lose their sense as the chapters progress and in the end, the expectations at the beginning  are not even minutely close to being held up in the later parts of the story.It's still great for a hilarious, light read with lots of turns and funny situations the mc gets himself in.

there's a lot of loopholes and unused abilities and a lot of stupidity:1-enhance the pills at the beginning then stop for no reason!!2-enhance the treasure on random basis (only ****ty treasure gets an enhancement but good and world treasures don’t!! WHY?)3-can't he concoct pills in secluded area!!?4-start concocting pills in very smart, theoretical and comprehensive way , suddenly became stupid in "disheveled hair and bloodshot eye" way, repeatedly 5-no character development at all (enforced stupidity for some repeated cliché) 6-no need to talk about the enforced stupid ****ty romance

Very nice! The chapters are nice and long, and full of great descriptive detail that makes this story a pleasure to read. I love the plot, especially with the idea of restarting a life after a tragedy has occurred. The characters are well fleshed out, though I would maybe like to see a bit more detail in their personality here and there. I think the one thing the author needs to work on is being careful not to switch tenses. There were several occasions that the tenses shifted, and a few grammatical errors, but these can easily be fixed.Great work author

wow ...great story dear writer ...looking forward to more ...

Another Faloo Novel that's all and most of the time they are only 25% the same as the raws lol