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can't wait for the new chapterrrr ...️...️...️

Read up till 100+ and it sucks.  I find the "this daddy" so irritating that it ruins the story for me. The plot seems so pointless that he is fighting almost everyone he meets and somehow ends up defeating them. The only thing that makes him "defeat" everyone he encounters is his plot armor. Without it he'd be nothing but a noisy young master who's so weak he can't even defeat his enemies while their number keeps increasing.

book is meh, its obv a copyim more annoyed that another week of *last weeks* title finally getting chapters, then WITH FOUR OTHER EDITOR PICKS ALREADY a different novel gets jammed im on a fridayfollowed by the thought, some other novel probly just got cut with no warning so favorites can be played/money can be chased...

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!It would be great if he became a billionaire and create your own virtual reality games companies and become the most powerful person in the world and at the same time level up with a good background story and a harem of beauties.

i thought this will be different but its just another one of rhose face slapping noveli thought this will be different but its just another one of rhose face slapping novel

Hello, first thing first, I was overwhelmed by how you tried to describe the world and it's system. I was confused and had to try to read it again. There aren't many grammatical errors but try not using repeated words. You have a great plot, but  your world background and character design needs improvement.