Jiang Lin suffers from a thirst for Shen Qingyao, and licking will temporarily alleviate it. This is a splendid and sweet campus story between two high school students.
The translation is riddled with mistakes, oscillating between first and third person perspectives, and suffers from grammatical inconsistencies and an inappropriate vocabulary. It appears that either the translator or the author failed to thoroughly proofread before publication. While the storyline itself is decent, it offers a consistent yet somewhat predictable pace, with a hint of tension. Occasionally, the narrative construction evokes a poetic charm.