Civil Servant in Romance Fantasy - Reviews

Is that a real proverb lolol that's wild if it is

Certainly like how the Bulgarian Proverb goes "you can't have both the d*ck in the *ss and soul in the heaven"

The overall story and plot is good, but it's very hard to understand I don't know if it due to translation or just authors mistake

Of course you can understand who is talking eventually if you try to understand hard enough, but that's the problem, it shouldn't be hard at all, you should never have to search to understand what's going on, you should be able to understand everything as you are reading because pausing every few Paragraphs to try to understand what's going on breaks the immersion, and that is a bad sign in a book.

Idk man it still doesn bother me in any way

Op probably meant that the writing or the translation doesn't flow well. I kinda agree with him too, the writing style is very repetitive(not talking about the plot, just grammar and vocabulary usage in general), it isn't the kind that would immerse you and makes you appreciate the book. Futhermore the POV itself is portrayed from first person, which makes the world around harder to illustrate without sufficient information and descriptions thrown towards us. Sometimes, we may have to go another mile and reference from different content from the internet to properly structure what kind of expressions the characters were making due to the writing style and the lack of information it provides.

Idk I kinda like the switch in pov

True, the thing that made me love this novel more IS the switch in POVs

ye they jus hatin, skill issue from their side

It reads like a korean webtoon that has too many closeups without showing the background. Extraordinarily difficult to read when it's primarily disembodied voices talking in a blank void half the time before zooming out on the setting half a notch. If you've never read a better novel with a similar style, then this just reads like a collection of thoughts you're eavesdropping on with very limited context. You will find yourself actually understanding things as simple as ordinary dialogue and interactions between characters only after you've read additional chapters because there's less than necessary context clues already written. The translation also has weird gender errors throughout that add onto the confusion.

What the living f*ck are you on? Some authors intentionally leave descriptions of characters blank so you can imagine them yourself. Also, use your head. They are at a school, picture a school and not some void. It barely affects anything…
The gender mistakes are so light compared to an actual bad translation, which change names and locations. It is a minor inconvenience…

i agree with this which is the one of the main reasons i didnt get through even ch46 lol, could not hold my attention cuz i was confused a lot of the time