CHILL BOY SYSTEM

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I am a new author l, and i really respect your dedication to comtinue uploading even though you have not gotten premium. The story is amazing btw. Keep it up hopefully u can get it to premium soon.

Okay so... With the two tags being #Reincarnation and #System, you can pretty much guess half of the story w/o actually reading it. But I digress...With 35 chapters up while I’m writing this review, I can honestly say it’s all the same cliche that you’ve read over and over in other novels of the same type. But that’s why we read it, don’t we? Nothing to write home about as of yet, but things at this stage are usually subject to change, be it for worse or better. If you’re looking for something different... Tough luck. Oh and by the way, I don’t have anything against the author YET. But it reeks of inexperience, I’d recommend cutting down the amount of chapters per week to increase the quality and then after it grows, increase the chapter amount. But it’s all just my own opinion. So take it with a grain of salt.

The story is not bad, I'm on chapter 14 and I still can't understand several things.For example, he is in an academy protected by a great mutant, but some policemen with a robot decide to attack them, I don't understand the thought of trying to defeat such a powerful mutant with policemen.Second, apparently it's normal to kill each other at school, I don't know if it's a satire of the United States or what.Third, a student is able to infiltrate an intelligent humanoid beast capable of murdering students, let's remember that we are in a school with powerful mutants.Fourth, upon "dying" he wakes up in a Battle Royale, and apparently an administrator tries to kill him for no reason, which is then turned into an MMORPG-like game.And that I'm only going for chapter 14.I think the story has potential, but it needs to correct several things.

  Menyiram tanamannya satu persatu. Menata letak pot yang terpajang diatas meja. Menyemprot bunga agar terlihat segar. Memotong dedaunan dan beberapa batang bunga. Yoona terus melakukan semua itu. Sedangkan Sehun, pria itu hanya mengamatinya dari sudut toko.

It's almost a given that humans are always gluttonous for eye candies and this can also be considered the 'curse' of being too handsome. No matter where or when, even if they aren't doing anything and just standing still, they'll always draw unwanted attention towards themselves. Just like some overpowered wizard in an MMORPG who keep stealing the aggro because of their insane amount of damage, making the DPS' dealers and tanks nothing more than a joke.