Cherry Chapstick - Reviews

"So when last did you see Rabi?" He asked

--dead?

[Because Tetsuya-sama formed that image unconsciously to me.]

Following the clown mask advice, the Raven haired man opened it, and inside was a very simple content.

"You couldn't live with your own failure, and where did that bring you? Back to me." Alex gave the soul of Escanor to Lili so she can eat it.

(That was the day I was going to get into my first fight)

[To be more accurate, it would be how strong a person would be in their most optimal state possible. To help make sure that you do not die recklessly, we have given you the ability to see the battle power of individuals as long as you have spoken to them. Now we shall go dormant and don't forget to ask us any questions if you need to. Just say "System, and the question". Please do not bother us with simple questions. Goodbye for now.]

So he politely asked adam who he mistook for a senior of a well-known sect that supporting the Kingdom of Acheron who he didn't know.

I don't know if my review would matter as I only enjoy reading books and not often review them so yeah despite what that I say in my opinion It's  decent enough which I enjoyed reading although the first 4 to 10 chapters were kinda annoying as there were lack of dialogues but it got better as it went on, characters are likeable,story pace is also good although there certain things I think you can improve like regarding the missing explanation of certain things like for example in case of system world quest there wasn't any mention of time limit or such, less appearance of status window which shows their progress(which confused me sometimes regarding their progress made by them).Overall I think the story I have read so far is good and keep up the good work as in the latest chapter I have read till now cleared  many of doubts and you are definitely improving so keep going forward and I hope you don't drop this book.(Also although the background is already set for MC and FMC world but honestly I think giving One Year for each calamity is short as it gets more dangerous for them later on and also I recommend creating a chapter 0 or something for showing the power of MCs and the fantasy world and also ranking of system,etc)

Not going to lie, I was not expecting much due to the title, but man did it somehow deliver. It's a hidden gem under the guise of an incredibly unappealing title. [Writing Quality] is extremely good. Far better than most from this website, I don't think anyone would have trouble reading it. And the [Stability of Updates] speak for themselves, with having more than 60+ chapters posted in the past three days.I think the plot's pretty good too. It's about mc possessing a minor villain of a game he played and makes use of his knowledge of the game to get legendary items at the start like his Sharingan. The world in of itself also seems to be similar to the Webnovel [The Author's POV]. It's a fantasy academy novel with swords and mana but also modern tech like virtual reality. Power system and abilities are classified in the standard SSS to F class and whatnot.Overall, was a good read and a great find.

As far as I've read, the writing is good, really easy to understand. The dynamics between the characters are great too, this has potential. Keep it up, Author!!!